tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post1168604399087413909..comments2023-06-05T04:14:14.667-07:00Comments on Caught Butterflies: I ♥ B.L.T.’swritingdianethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05955424888288307481noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-9417949172520322422012-02-22T16:18:09.539-08:002012-02-22T16:18:09.539-08:00Oh yes, a BLT is such a supreme treat. I like mi...Oh yes, a BLT is such a supreme treat. I like mine on rye.Savannah McQueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01278922830885735193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-49003463184450428512012-02-21T09:33:36.144-08:002012-02-21T09:33:36.144-08:00Great description. I wanted that BLT:~) I loved ho...Great description. I wanted that BLT:~) I loved how you combined the ingredients of the once a year exam, the conversation between the doctor and this woman with the "only one a year." I thought this story was perfectly done, like the bacon of a good BLT!Sarahttp://www.sarahealy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-23941370998216589402012-02-18T12:01:46.315-08:002012-02-18T12:01:46.315-08:00I like how you took an annual female visit and mad...I like how you took an annual female visit and made it into something that everyone could relate to, all with your dialogue. This was great.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-56423756395944287682012-02-18T06:53:39.978-08:002012-02-18T06:53:39.978-08:00Everything in moderation, indeed. Except in our im...Everything in moderation, indeed. Except in our imaginations, where we can built that perfect sandwich over and over, without fear for our health.<br /><br />I love your descriptions of the sandwich, and I agree with Cheryl, you don't need the flaccid-phrase. It's stronger without.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-2907770649210222372012-02-17T21:06:24.096-08:002012-02-17T21:06:24.096-08:00I also don't know how you got in a BLT to a gy...I also don't know how you got in a BLT to a gynecological exam, but it worked!<br /><br />I would shorten the description in the first graf. For instance, when you say "Bacon stiff like a diving board" you don't need the flaccid part, since that's redundant.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-59795232770313929942012-02-17T14:05:44.300-08:002012-02-17T14:05:44.300-08:00I liked the dialouge, the thoughts in her head mix...I liked the dialouge, the thoughts in her head mixing with the conversation with the doctor..it flowed so easily and with language that took us to that room with them <br /><br />I enjoyed this very much.Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-35813808948062964852012-02-17T11:47:29.831-08:002012-02-17T11:47:29.831-08:00Hey Gals:
Thanks so much for stopping by:) Glad y...Hey Gals:<br /><br />Thanks so much for stopping by:) Glad you liked this piece. Please let me know if you'd tweak anything. If anything caught you up, in a bad way.<br /><br />I don't know about you guys, but I'd give anything for a real, live summer tomato about now! So I could make a BLT!!!writingdianethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05955424888288307481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-29838230163156753212012-02-17T08:42:22.932-08:002012-02-17T08:42:22.932-08:00Such an interesting blend of stories. Food and th...Such an interesting blend of stories. Food and the gynecological exam. At first, I was leary I was going to be able to connect the two in my mind, but by the end, they were perfect. You got is so right. The exam was described with perfection and her feelings and fear were evident.Jen Has A Penhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01985462114936261199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-81272827566698770442012-02-17T07:29:39.938-08:002012-02-17T07:29:39.938-08:00What a description! Very real and I feel like I w...What a description! Very real and I feel like I was in the room with you. What I would not give for a bit of that BLTmryjhnsnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08957396450720425382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-59835786865763410262012-02-17T07:10:21.259-08:002012-02-17T07:10:21.259-08:00Loved where you took this. You used a BLT as a veh...Loved where you took this. You used a BLT as a vehicle to reach so much deeper. Well written.Lindy Phippen Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13797304779576056899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783946338855754712.post-36503670154845929242012-02-17T06:09:55.933-08:002012-02-17T06:09:55.933-08:00I really enjoyed reading this and felt your emotio...I really enjoyed reading this and felt your emotions. Good job!lovemyspyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09408660070580280917noreply@blogger.com